2022.5.7 |外教范文分析(含阅读范文)

10多年来，喜欢吃辣的加拿大大叔雅思托福一直把中文教得很好。 图标由他的家猫在这里分享他原创雅思创作晾衣架的各范文配音。 用同名的公众号“英语考试Cat”你好。 我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。

今天，给大家带来2022年5月7日大陆雅思大作文真题的范文和解析。

旧规则，以下是正文目录。 1、主题2、审题3、高分范文4、范文朗读5、范文地道词汇中英对照，包括：

主题转换讨论观点类大作文高分句型表示“词汇丰富”的词汇短语“连贯与联系”的词汇句型

上题： somepeoplethinkthatitisbettertoleavetheirhomecountryforimprovingtheirworkandlivingopportunities.othersbelievethatitisbettttisbes

Type: Discuss Opinion讨论观点( depends on the inpidual ) )。 body1: don’tmindbeingdetachedfromcultureandhaveconfidence:why better出境更好的原因body2: remaininhomecountryiseasierandvoidofce keywords:isbetterforimprovingworkandlivingopportunities/intheirhomecountry

-朗读- Model Answer高分范文-

范文语音戳此处therearethosethatfeelasuperiormethodofdevelopingone’sworkandlifeopportunitiesistomigratetoanothernation； whereas，othersfeelremainingintheirownsocietyisbetter.thisessayshallexplorebothviewpoints； however，in my opinion，‘better’prospectsdependontheinpidual’ssituationandmindset。

oneofthemainreasonswhysomefeelitisbettertoleaveone’scountryinpursuitofgreateropportunitiesisthatbymovingoverseas， themigrantmayfeelliberatedfromanysocialconventionsthatactedasahindrance.inotherwords，byhavingtheconfidencetomoveabroad， onemayfeelmuchlessrestrainedbyone’sowntraditionalandculturalnorms，and in many cases，thiscanalsoincludefamilyandperessure inconjunctionwithchoosingtomigratetoacountrythatwelcomesforeignersandiseconomicallysalient，makeopportunitiesforanimprovedstaliet

On the other hand，itisfeltbymanythatbyremaininginone’sown culture， itissimplymucheasiertofindopportunitiesandismorecomfortable.bystayinginone’sown society，aninpidualcanstillretainthecomforecomfore and perhaps more importantly，thepersondoesnotneedtoadapttoanewcultureornewlanguage， allofwhichmakeiteasiertolocateasuitablejobandwhichareconducivetoconstructingasatisfactorylifestyle.further more， apersonlivingintheirownsocietywillfinditmuchlessconfusingtounderstandthebureaucraticinsandoutsoftheirownsociety。

In conclusion、goingabroadtoseekbetterprospectsmaybeidealforthepersonwhohastheconfidencetoadapttoanewsociety、but for many、 remaininginafamiliarenvironmentstillallowsforworkandlifestyleopportunitiesvoidoftheconfusionaforeigncountryposes； however，in my opinion，regardless where one resides，opportunities are ever-present，withtherewardbeingalifestyleofchoicerathes

- Essay Analysis范文分析-

-1) introductiontherearethosethatfeelasuperiormethodofdevelopingone’sworkandlifeopportunitiesistomigratetoanothernation othersfeelremainingintheirownsocietyisbetter.thisessayshallexplorebothviewpoints； however，in my opinion，‘better’prospectsdependontheinpidual’ssituationandmindset。

更改paraphrasingfromthestatement/question主题：

somepeoplethinkthat=therearethosethatfeelisbetter=superiormethodtoleave=to migrate ( leave ) homecountry=) migrateto ) anothernationforimproving=ofdevelopingliving=lifestandardphraseforthe“discuss opinion”type essay讨论观点类大作文高分句型：

There are those that feel； whereas，othersfeelthisessayshallexplorebothviewpoints； however，inmyopinionwordsshowingcohesion ( cc )展示了“一致和联系”的词和短语。

one’s； whereas，otherstheir ownThis； however，Vocabulary高分地道词汇和短语：

superior占优势的更好的migrate向prospects移民前景mindset心态； 想法

(2) body1- aspectsthatmustbereferredto )本段应提及：

why going overseas is better为什么出国更好oneofthemainreasonswhysomefeelitisbettertoleaveone’scountryinpursuitofgreateropportunion overseas，themigrantmayfeelliberatedfromanysocialconventionsthatactedasahindrance.inotherwords，byhavingtheconfidencetomove onemayfeelmuchlessrestrainedbyone’sowntraditionalandculturalnorms，and in many cases，thiscanalsoincludefamilyandperessure inconjunctionwithchoosingtomigratetoacountrythatwelcomesforeignersandiseconomicallysalient，makeopportunitiesforanimprovedstaliet

标准IELTS essay phrase雅思高频句型：

oneofthemainreasonswhy…isthatvocabularyandcollocations高分地道词汇和短语：

overseas海外the migrant移民； 移民liberated解放social conventions社会习俗hindrance干扰； 阻碍abroad国外less restrained的限制少限制少限制的traditional and cultural norms传统和文化习俗peer pressure同辈的压力economically salient经济上更好的wordsshowing

isthatbymovingthatactedasainotherwords，byhavingbyone’s，and in many cases，this can alsoThese aspects，inconjunctiontionwits

-3) body2- aspectsthatmustbereferredto此段落必须提及：

remaining inone’shomecountryisbetter为什么最好留在本国On the other hand，itisfeltbymanythatbyremaininginone’sown culture， itissimplymucheasiertofindopportunitiesandismorecomfortable.bystayinginone’sown society，aninpidualcanstillretainthecomforecomfore and perhaps more importantly，thepersondoesnotneedtoadapttoanewcultureornewlanguage， allofwhichmakeiteasiertolocateasuitablejobandwhichareconducivetoconstructingasatisfactorylifestyle.further more， apersonlivingintheirownsocietywillfinditmuchlessconfusingtounderstandthebureaucraticinsandoutsoftheirownsociety。

标准IELTS essay phrase雅思高频句型：

On the other hand，itisfeltbymany…vocabularyandcollocations高分的地道词汇和短语：

保留； 维持Conducive to有利于有利的Bureaucratic官僚的复杂的Ins and outs内外； 经过wordsshowingcohesion [ signpostingwords，conjunctions，relative pronouns ] (抄送中显示了“一致性和联系”的词汇和短语。

On the other hand，itthat byBy staying，and perhaps more importantly，allofwhichmakeiteasiertoandwhichfurthermore

(4) Conclusion -

In conclusion、goingabroadtoseekbetterprospectsmaybeidealforthepersonwhohastheconfidencetoadapttoanewsociety、but for many、 remaininginafamiliarenvironmentstillallowsforworkandlifestyleopportunitiesvoidoftheconfusionaforeigncountryposes； however，in my opinion，regardless where one resides，opportunities are ever-present，withtherewardbeingalifestyleofchoicerathes

标准IELTS essay phrase雅思高频句型：

In conclusion，in my opinion，Vocabulary and Collocations高分地道词汇和短语：

没有void of不足的poses引起的； ever-present的产生无处不在…ofchoiceratherthanoneofcircumstance ( expression ) wordsshowingcohesion [ signpostingwords，cord

may be ideal for，but for many，remaining； however，regardless where one

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